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    Looming in the dark....

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    Re: Looming in the dark....

    Nice idea, exposure and focus/DoF. I'm not sure if the white balance works for me or if it would look better a tad cooler.

    I'm thinking a bit of a crop from the right so the very edge of the palm leaves are cut off to match the left edge of the image and perhaps a bit of straightening to the right.
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    Re: Looming in the dark....

    Very nice job on a tricky exposure.

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    Re: Looming in the dark....

    Very dramatic. Love all the light going on here.
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    Re: Looming in the dark....

    Really nice job on this, danic. I agree about cropping on the right, but other than that...

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    Re: Looming in the dark....

    H Danic,
    I like your idea of the constrast bewteen the trees and the tall building. The shot is intriguing.
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    Re: Looming in the dark....

    I like it, I like the deep colors and you caught the tops of the buildings nicely. I'd probably crop the right as well but without cropping the palms, to give an end to right edge. That said I'd also crop on the left to drop the first main building, this eliminating some of the weight on the left to balance the shot (at least that's the feel I get when holding up some paper to do an on screen crop?). Cheers, S.
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