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    photo gallery Mod. starriderrick's Avatar
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    Lookout to Look In

    I marked the spot on the glass where "Look In" was captured.Yet another angle on the SJ City Hall. Does this comp work? Thanks.

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    Re: Lookout to Look In

    The angle works fine but I think you should crop most of the sky out.
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    Re: Lookout to Look In

    I agree. The sky is pretty but it distracts.

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    Re: Lookout to Look In

    I say leave the sky in.

    It then breaks the image into your thirds. Perhaps some people to add more to the shot? Just an idea
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