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Thread: Looking Out

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    Looking Out

    Comments are welcome and appreciated.

    PIcked up a new (to me) Pentax 645. I don't do people pictures too often. Fortunately my daughter was a co-operative model.
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    Re: Looking Out

    great color! the black pole down the right is distracting to me - maybe you could play with the cropping a bit.

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    Re: Looking Out

    Quote Originally Posted by chocolic
    great color! the black pole down the right is distracting to me - maybe you could play with the cropping a bit.
    I'm not a photoshop kinda person, so bear with me.

    Were you thinking of something like this?
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    Re: Looking Out

    I like the second better but again it looks to me like your focal point was just a touch off. I would like her eyes to be the focal point but it looks like the her shirt at the bottom of the frame is where the sharpest focus is.

    BTW cute kid, gets it from mom?
    No, I DON'T need that.

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    Re: Looking Out

    LOL, yes she has her moms features...fortunately.

    I took a look at my camera to see what I was missing. I think my diopter on the viewfinder prism was off. I'll see how it affects the next roll.
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