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    Looking away....

    Taken while out hiking 'round a lake. Models name is Molly.
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    Re: Looking away....

    Great DOF, nice color if not a bit overwhelming. The only improvement that immediately comes to mind is to have the negative space on the side where the guy is looking rather than the other side (but you don't always know which way he'll look, and if you snooze....)

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    Re: Looking away....

    Quote Originally Posted by GB1
    Great DOF, nice color if not a bit overwhelming. The only improvement that immediately comes to mind is to have the negative space on the side where the guy is looking rather than the other side (but you don't always know which way he'll look, and if you snooze....)

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    I totally agree with what GB1 said.

    Great exposure colours, subject. But framing I think can be helped. Wish there was more space on the left instead of the right.

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