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One time, like a few months ago, I saw the Oscar Mayer Weiner mobile drive by the restraunt I work at. I wish i had my camera. It was a once in a lifetime experience... as possibly was this.
I don't want it, I just need it...to breath ...to feel ...to know I'm alive.
Good capture overall, though from a creative aspect it is missing a punchline. The van is straightforward, but I guess I don't care for the background, esp the area at the top of the shot. It is old and mundane compared to the van.
You see these type of vehicles all the time in Cali btw... the weather is good for preserving old cars. You would not believe some of the strange vehicles I've seen here....... (hey, maybe I'll start taking pix of them for a book or something?)
GB
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With a levels adjustment the colors would really stand out. Also I'd crop out the top of the frame a little above the top of the van. Good capture.
John