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Thread: Lonely orange

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    Lonely orange



    Nikon D60
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    Sigma 70-300 @ 300mm

    Comments? tips?

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    Re: Lonely orange

    I think this would be stronger if the color of the orange was more orange and less yellow (at least on my laptop monitor). I would also prefer if you only had color in the orange and not the leaves.

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    Re: Lonely orange

    What I think;

    The orange that you colored is too small a part of the image. The other oranges should be colored too. Focus looks soft.
    No, I DON'T need that.

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    Re: Lonely orange

    True...I'll have another try at this shot.

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    Re: Lonely orange

    I agree with MB, the orange can't be that lonely as I can see at least two others in close proximity!

    TracerNH, having an orange tree in my back yard, I can attest to the fact that the color is pretty darn accurate

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    Re: Lonely orange

    As above, the idea is good, but as soon as I saw the other orange I thought not so lonely. Again I like the idea though. S
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    Re: Lonely orange

    Unless my eyes are playing tricks on me, there are 4 oranges besides the one you colored, I would kill the green in the leaves, and give all the oranges color.

    Also, the orange you do have colored is over exposed. I think it would look great if you could get true color, as opposed to the yellow and white over exposed mess thats there now.

    Great shot though, you can make something good from it.

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