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Rule books are paper they will not cushion a sudden meeting of stone and metal. --Ernie Gann-- What is a cynic? A man who knows the price of everything and the value of nothing. --Oscar Wilde--
looks good what is that in front of the picture a big rock? i like the idea a desert type landscape then one green tree with a perfectly blue sky. polarized?
The photo seems unrealistic because of a halo around the tree.
Technically the white on the stone is overpowering the picture and needs to be burnt in a it to dull it down. The tree was overworked with a dodge tool or something showing an obvious halo around it. It almost looks like it was pasted in from another picture.
Asthetically - for me the stones are too close and overpower the image and makes the tree pale into insignificance in the image even though it jumps up and bites you because of the colour. All in all the two make the photo unbalanced and I would suggest cropping a section of sky out of the photo so that the top is an 1" above the tree. I would also tone down the colour of the tree and even consider B&W for this photo.
Sorry for ripping this apart but can't figure out a way to soften the blow.
Roger
"I hope we will never see the day when photo shops sell little schema grills to clamp onto our viewfinders; and the Golden Rule will never be found etched on our ground glass."from The mind's eye by Henri Cartier-Bresson
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Ronnocco is that you?
Well the tree is neither pasted or worked in any manner. I adjusted saturation, contrast, and sharpness. The original seems to have a bit of a "halo" around the tree also. I guess I didn't exactly know why this image was in my semi trash pile, but you've seemed to sum it up nicely.
Rule books are paper they will not cushion a sudden meeting of stone and metal. --Ernie Gann-- What is a cynic? A man who knows the price of everything and the value of nothing. --Oscar Wilde--
The lone tree is a good subject, and Roger made some good points about the foreground elements. they are too over powering, and even burning them in might not help too much.
Ronnocco is that you?
Well the tree is neither pasted or worked in any manner. I adjusted saturation, contrast, and sharpness. The original seems to have a bit of a "halo" around the tree also. I guess I didn't exactly know why this image was in my semi trash pile, but you've seemed to sum it up nicely.
:cryin: That's why I apologised, I re-wrote it twice before giving up and apologising. I couldn't find a way of softening it any more.
Roger
"I hope we will never see the day when photo shops sell little schema grills to clamp onto our viewfinders; and the Golden Rule will never be found etched on our ground glass."from The mind's eye by Henri Cartier-Bresson
My Web Site: www.readingr.com DSLR
Canon 5D; EF100-400 F4.5-5.6L IS USM; EF24-70 F2.8L USM 50mm F1.8 II; EF 100 F2.8 Macro Digital
Canon Powershot Pro 1; Canon Ixus 100
:cryin: That's why I apologised, I re-wrote it twice before giving up and apologising. I couldn't find a way of softening it any more.
Roger
I'm totally just kidding man. No worries.
Rule books are paper they will not cushion a sudden meeting of stone and metal. --Ernie Gann-- What is a cynic? A man who knows the price of everything and the value of nothing. --Oscar Wilde--