Little boy

[EKB]

I just found this site today. Here are a couple pictures I took of my kid. Any feedback is appreciated.

[payn817]

The middle one is the better one for me. Perhaps burning in the sofa would make the texture on it less distracting (the seam). Not sure, but perhaps a little more room to include more of each face. It certainly shows a great and intimate moment, and the lighting is nice. Even with my two suggestions, I still like it alot. He's a beauty!

[jar_e]

EKB,

I posted my critique in the "test" thread.

My apologies,

Jared