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Thread: The Lineup

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    The Lineup


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    Re: The Lineup

    I like it.

    The bird is a nice touch.

    Do you have more foreground available? Might add a little.
    No, I DON'T need that.

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    Re: The Lineup

    I see 13 stories and maybe 14 if you count the bird.
    Looks like they're waiting for the bus...Maybe an outing for a group home or senior citizen group?
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    Re: The Lineup

    I see a great example of a proper crop..I see nothing you can do to better the pic..It is worthy of a frame and hung on the wall..
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    Re: The Lineup

    Great shot Tuna, I see a little motion blur on one of the mens hand, but I this one belongs in gallery. The composition is perfect. Well Captured.
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    Re: The Lineup

    Very good. I'm glad there was not a man sitting in front of the man bending down

    The woman sitting near the middle looks abit "modern" in respect to the rest, but this is one great shot.
    Everyone in their own world and none paying the pigeon any mind.
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    Re: The Lineup

    The fact that noone, from so many "sitters" seems to have noticed the camera (maybe the one on the extreme left as we look, a little bit) makes this shot. Where were you hiding Tuna. The letterbox style is great any any more foreground or background would take from the "Line Out". I have a smaller lineup type shot, but poorer in all areas than this one, sitting somewhere. I will try and find it and post it here just for the craic.
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    Re: The Lineup

    Yes, the pigeon...

    I made the thoughtless mistake of feeding a pigeon in Florence and he followed me throughout the rest of my stay in Italy. I suppose it was only appropriate that I used him to anchor an image.

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    Re: The Lineup

    reminds me of Borat's family & friends..



    i do like it though, where is the location if you don't mind me asking ?

    thanks

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