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    Lighthouse

    Lighthouse in Ontario.
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    Re: Lighthouse

    Hi Drew - Nice shot overall. The upper part of the lighthouse could be a little better illuminated though. Perhaps it was the time of day and the shadows did that. A solution would be to wait till sunset or get there at sunrise , when the warm sunlight hits it from the side and adds some orange (it's a tad bit cold as is).

    Lighthouses are great but it's hard to get a unique shot of one that stands out from the others. This one is compositionally correct, but I would analyze the scene and try to think of new angles, filters, etc that might let it pull away from the pack.

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    Re: Lighthouse

    This any better?
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    Re: Lighthouse

    Yes! Looks a lot more vibrant. Not sure if the foreground water is necessary though. I might crop it (??)
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