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Thread: Light trails.

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    Light trails.

    Light trails of the at an intersection from my balcony. I was just experimenting with it because i thought it looked nice from some pictures i've seen.
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    Re: Light trails.

    Good experiment, and I think your shots will get better and better. I would like to see a street light in the image, or perhaps a person standing on the corner. I would crop out the bottom area to just above where the third/lowest set (one actuall) of lights are, as I think it looks cleaner without it.

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    Re: Light trails.

    Alright. thanks for the information. I'll keep working on it.

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    Re: Light trails.

    nice timing on the shutter (not overdone)
    the BW doesn't work for me.
    the colored image will show the direction of the vehicles

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    Re: Light trails.

    Nice composition. It has an abstract art feel to it. I wonder what it would look like with the abstract pushed even further - perhaps posterized, etc. I agree that the poles at the bottom are distracting, but if you crop the bottom out you loose the "swoosh" of the lights on the curve. Perhaps they can be cloned out.

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    Re: Light trails.

    I like the compostion the light poles could be easily cloned. It would be hard to put a person in the shot with the long exposure. Nice work.
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