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    Senior Shooter Greg McCary's Avatar
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    Light through a Window

    I was hoping this one would work as an abstract. What do you think?

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    Re: Light through a Window

    Quote Originally Posted by Greg McCary
    I was hoping this one would work as an abstract.
    But you already said it was light through a window

    Still, it looks good to me.

    Any chance you could remove those lines on the other side of the window?

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    Re: Light through a Window

    Greg, to me, its too apparent to be an abstract but nice colors and exposure.
    Please ask to edit photos and I'll do the same! :thumbsup:
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    Re: Light through a Window

    It's cool because it looks like gold flake, not sunlight.

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    Re: Light through a Window

    Not very abstract Greg but very enjoyable none the less. The shapes behing give it that little something extra and the colours work very well together.
    This would work very well as part of a series.
    BTW have we seen this before in b/w? Perhaps something similar.
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    Re: Light through a Window

    Thanks everyone, Yes Tom this is from the same spot as the B&W just at night. Part of the old factory I work at. The lighting is from a flourecent fixture on the other side. I guess not an abstract though.
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    Re: Light through a Window

    I come back to it several times trying to figure how come I like it and don't.
    I think its the surroundings that have nothing to do with the pic that make me not like it.
    Here it is sitting surrounded by white, and words, etc. There's a place for it on a wall somewhere......big so the viewer would think he/she is actually looking at window.
    Just a thought.
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