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    Light Takes Flight

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    any feedback will be much appreciated. =)

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    Re: Light Takes Flight

    This is a cool shot. My main suggestion is crop out the right most bird. Do you have the color version?
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    Re: Light Takes Flight

    not at the moment, sorry, it's on my laptop which i dont have with me at this time.

    i'll try croppin it later. u think the birds on the left are ok ?

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    Re: Light Takes Flight

    The birds on the left don't bug me at all.
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    Re: Light Takes Flight

    Very nice shot. I really like the contrast of this image, the black of the trees, the snow, but the subject of the shot, the birds. I like it a lot. I would crop out the far right bird, but also the three on the left and make the main portion of this image the shot. Nice job.

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    Re: Light Takes Flight

    Unfortunately with birds you need to be closer or have a very strong telephoto.

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    Re: Light Takes Flight

    I'm going to agree with the cropping suggestions.
    I don't agree with Ronnoco, which is rare for me.
    If he was closer or used a big zoom, he'd have a bird or two against some branches and the 'feel' wouldn't be the same.
    I do wish there was more contrast between the birds and trees but I think this is basically a great shot and the tittle says it all.
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