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    Lifeless...

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    Re: Lifeless...

    Sharp with interesting composition.
    I'd leave a bit more space on top and less on right.
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    Re: Lifeless...

    I agree with Frog about leaving more room at the top, but I'm ok with the way it's cropped on the right.

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    Re: Lifeless...

    Dramatic image but the large border distracts from your work.

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    Re: Lifeless...

    Frankly, I thnk the level horizon is a little too tame. It needs a little tilt or even curvature to make it dance.

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    Re: Lifeless...

    I looked at this the other day and didn't know what to say. I really agree with Don, I couldn't figure out what it was missing. I would even try going spherical with it. I just think the composition asks for it. That tree and the point in the sky are battling for my eye and it seems to me that making the sky the focal point and relegating the tree to an ominous element would be the best way to go. Just a thought...Great shot regardless.

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