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What is the intent with this photo? Is it just a lighting exercise or is there a message? I ask because it's always good to ask ourselves what our motives are with a photo. Sometimes we haven't really thought it out. And if we aren't sure, then that vagueness often ends up making a photo that isn't as strong as it might be. And I feel that might be the case here. It seems like you're trying to say something. But I'm not sure what it is.
Some photographers do take photos that don't seem to carry any meaning other than, perhaps, a showcase of shape, colors, forms, etc. Here's an example:
Thanks for the replies. Yeah, I was definitely working on lighting on this shot. But I was also exploring the Lego, trying to find something in the way of the Slinky shots.
There is a sort of dual meaning to the shot. I am also trying to create art with Legos (not photographically, but statuary.) So, as the title suggests, a beginning, meaning you start with one brick. Also, "Let there be light", creation, etc.
I will admit, however, that I had a hard time presenting what I would deem a "good shot". At this point, it is a tough subject, as far as getting something as unique or interesting, as the Slinky shots. My first thought was to create shadows, which, at least, I did get in this shot. But that does not create enough interest, I think.
I will have to think outside the box and perhaps put the Lego in an unexpected environment.
AE, thanks for that link. That is, in general. where I am going.
Hmm. I think it's a worthy idea Arne but the execution is a bit too straight up. All I really see is a lego sitting in a dark room with some light hitting it. I think you can find a more creative angle, perhaps adding more supporting characters in the background, to make it a more exciting image. Give it a shot!
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