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Not as good as the first set you posted. There seems to be some blurring, although I don't know if that's what you intended. The light coming from the left is a little harsh on her as some blowing out appears on her right arm and the right side of her face. It also has a yellow cast to it, and a WB adjustment is needed. I like the setting though.
John
afdlips -I second what John wrote. I do like the warmth of the lighting on her, and I like the traffic in the background, which creates a feeling of action. But I'm also thinking you could have shown more of the subject (her right arm, more of the guitar, etc). There is probably not much you could do, but I think it would have been better w/o the diagonal window supports there and the seat (???) in front of the window.. They are distractions that take away from a pretty nice subject and background.
GB
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