Late-Night Pool 2

[thereistruth]

Another shot taken late at night with a two-second exposure.

[McMadCow]

I like the framing of this one more than the first, but I think this is seriously lacking a proper setting. This has the potential to be a dramatic, moody shot... however, it really isn't when we see that it's taking place in what looks like a living room. I think you could greatly improve it by somehow eliminating the bland background elements. When I'm just looking at a regular room, there is no sense of drama... it's just a snapshot to test a photographic technique.
I do, however, like the tones and the frozen initial positions of the balls. Good start!