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    late evening in Hamburg/Germany

    This one is a couple of days old and shows the Spiegel buildings (German news magazine) with a lady crossing a bridge in the foreground.
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    Re: late evening in Hamburg/Germany

    Not a bid idea but I think it would have been better if you had taken the photo when the sky was a deeper blue and the person on the bridge was in the left 1/3 of the image so as not to get lost in the clutter of buildings.

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    Re: late evening in Hamburg/Germany

    she is on the left now and i made the whole a bit darker. is it better?
    thanks
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    Re: late evening in Hamburg/Germany

    I'm sort of torn on this one... It seems to have some good things happening - the graduated blue sky, simplicity, etc - but the composition is just so, hmm ... out there, that I'm not sure I could ever accept it. I've tried visually removing the area below the bridge etc, but it still bites at me. Perhaps if the woman was walking the other way?

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    PS - Looks like the Germans are really using a lot of Englisch words now
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