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    at last summer has arrived.

    Just snapped this one, let me know what you think...

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    Re: at last summer has arrived.

    Love the bokeh, but the obvious street tilt is a bit disorientating.

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    Re: at last summer has arrived.

    Yeah the bokeh is sick, Its the first shot i am pleased with from my 50mm 1.8
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    Re: at last summer has arrived.

    nothing else?
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    Re: at last summer has arrived.

    I like the subject and bokeh, and the tilt doesn't bother me. However, I don't like how close she is to the edge of the frame. Some pictures work when you "break the rules" but personally I'd like to see more of what she's running towards not from. Although I'm sure there are others who love the sense of space behind her that she's covered, if that makes sense.

    The only thing that is really distracting is the dark/red object in the frame. I'd definitely remove that.
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