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    Kidskidskids promo!

    Took some pictures for my friends band, light was extremely harsh frustrating at times but they like it, and I think its ok let me know what you think.






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    Re: Kidskidskids promo!

    Nice and Sharp

    but looks like its a catalogue shoot for urban Clothing
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    Re: Kidskidskids promo!

    The first one is really bad for the light but the second two are much better.
    Problem with the second is the chopped off feet.
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    Re: Kidskidskids promo!

    Quote Originally Posted by Frog
    The first one is really bad for the light but the second two are much better.
    Problem with the second is the chopped off feet.
    My thoughts exactly

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    Re: Kidskidskids promo!

    Yep could not agree with you guys(last 2) anymore, lighting was tough like i said and the feet they didnt have feet at all so there not cropped off , yeah it is pestering to look at that photo because their is a slight excess of space towards the top and to little at the bottom.

    Oh and I have singles of them each on my flickr

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    Re: Kidskidskids promo!

    i think these would work well in black/white or sepia...maybe add a little blur for effect.

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    Re: Kidskidskids promo!

    Hmmm. I like the poses and expressions in the first one (they remind me of the Jonas Bros. in that one for some strange reason), the light in the second one, and a lot about the third one. If you cropped about a quarter- to a half-inch above leftmost guy's head, I think you'd have something really nice.

    Did you use a reflector? Certainly looks it in #s 2 and 3.

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    Re: Kidskidskids promo!

    ok here is the cropped version.



    and I did not use any reflectors no lighting for any of these shots, it was too bright.
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