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    Kids with simple smiles

    Hello I was testing my 50mm f/1.8 outside with the kids and hoping that this time its better than my previous photos hmm. I took them in RAW file and just a bit of processing still kinda struggle with processing because I don't know whether the image is ok or not because of my monitor setting is at 50% brightness and contrast (not sure how to calibrate it)

    anyway heres are the photos taken the other day.






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    Re: Kids with simple smiles

    I'm not a portrait person, but I comment anyway.

    I think you have done a nice job. I like how you are down at their level rather than looking down at them.

    Watch your backgrounds. All three have lines going through their heads. Also, I think that just a touch of fill flash would really brighten up the eyes.

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    Re: Kids with simple smiles

    thank you for pointing out those things i'll try to retouch the lines.
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    Re: Kids with simple smiles

    Kids with simple smiles are so cute. They are like the innocence of children. Their smiles give me a joy that I never felt before. They make me remember what it is to be happy and carefree. The simplicity of their smiles is refreshing and makes me feel like I am young again. Visit https://masterbundles.com/best-kids-clipart/ source to get amazing templates for free. When I see a kid with an innocent smile, I immediately think of my own childhood days and how much fun it was being a kid.

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