Keeping busy

[danic]

Self critique: Seems a little busy, but not too sure. Does the focal point work or is there too much to focus on?

[LeeIs]

I think the focal point is just fine. The bee and its flower are sharp. maybe you can blur some of the other flowers that are just as sharp. As far as business, it doesn't bother me the dof keeps the other focuses from interfering for the most part and it's nice and colourful. How about cropping it to a vertical of the left side of this? I'm not a big fan of doing this but looking at my monitor I think that would get rid of the greens on the right and bring the bee in a bit closer towards the pic. nice one though.

[starriderrick]

Hi danic,
Yes, small bit of cropping, then back to work.I like the bokeh in this capture.Very smooth.

Rick

[danic]

Cheers Guys,

I'll take up your suggestion of cropping and get back to work!

Cheers,
Dan