Keep It Clean

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  • 12-27-2005, 08:33 AM
    Overbeyond
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    Keep It Clean
    I would welcome your comments on this shot please.
    Tom
  • 12-27-2005, 09:09 AM
    juzzus
    Re: Keep It Clean
    It would have achieved a better result if only that some light fall onto the main subject (letterbox) ... Interesting framing tho .
  • 12-27-2005, 11:35 AM
    gahspidy
    Re: Keep It Clean
    Tom, i also like your framing here. It goes along way into bringing a ordinarysubject into an interesting vision. Tow points to improve this; First, as suggested already, having more or stronger lighting falling into the foreground or at least highlighting the box would have been great ( you may be able to pull out a bit in PS) and second, I would have liked to have seen this shot from a slightly lower vantage point. That would bring the peak of the litter box up over the wooded rail and create a more 3 dimensional impact. I find the bg very interesting and the lower vantage point would also bring a bit more of it to the scene. Those are merely suggestions for improving, but i like how you have captured this as it is.
  • 12-27-2005, 12:21 PM
    swmdrayfan
    Re: Keep It Clean
    Aside from what has already been said, I like the many angles and lines in this picture.
  • 12-29-2005, 07:26 AM
    Overbeyond
    Re: Keep It Clean
    Thanks You you all for your constructive comments.
    I accept your criticism concerning the light on the box and I shall remedy this should I choose to print this.
    You are right Gary about the peak of the box being lost in the rail but I never honestly noticed this.
    Thanks for that.
    Tom