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    Kahina - do you think she will like these?

    Photos from last Sunday's shoot with Kahina. Do you think she will like them?

    This was another nude shoot with ARTIS (French club) but I needed more portraits. While the others bashed away doing full body shots I was out at 200mm on the 18-200 doing close-ups.
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    Re: Kahina - do you think she will like these?

    Who knows if she will, likely depends on how many images of herself she has seen.

    I'd say of these three the first one is the killer for sure. A hint of mystery, perfect highlights and nice composition although the knee is a little bright (could you burn it in a bit?).
    No, I DON'T need that.

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    Re: Kahina - do you think she will like these?

    She is beautiful and so are the photo's, I like the 2nd one, great shots. ( I agree about the knee's)

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    Re: Kahina - do you think she will like these?

    I like them all but the first two are best because they are more unique.
    Knee a bit bright in first as MB1 said but still great shot.
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    Re: Kahina - do you think she will like these?

    I like number 1..and if you can eliminate some of the under eye flowing hairs!!
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    Re: Kahina - do you think she will like these?

    OK for the knee. I'll get dodging.

    She has a really extraordinary face, a mixture of oriental, arab, black and white according to her mood. One of her favourite tricks is to put her hair in front of her face which adds to the mystery.

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    Re: Kahina - do you think she will like these?

    They are all winners to me but I happen to really like #3....
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    Re: Kahina - do you think she will like these?

    I think she will like #1 ... I like # 3

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    Re: Kahina - do you think she will like these?

    Pretty obvious that the gallery liked #2. Congrats on your POW.
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    Re: Kahina - do you think she will like these?

    Numbers 1 and 2 work for me. There's a softness around her eyes that I normally don't like, but think is OK here. Number 3 looks a bit awkward, almost like a doctor's office visit. Congrats on the first two though.

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    Re: Kahina - do you think she will like these?

    I love the number 2, with the touch of 'fragilité' in the attitude.

    The first one would be perfect if the knee color was less pink (at least on my monitor).

    I do not like the head profile in the third photo (but don't tell her), but the pose is very nice.

    Of course, my comments are amateurish... as i am no way a professional photograph.

    Si seulement je savais faire des portraits, mais ce n'est pas mon truc.
    (if only i knew how to do such photos, but i am unable to capture correctly a human face)
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