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The lighting looks good, but the background could be better. Curious about the antenna, is that a remote controlled stetson?
Seriously, I'd try pinning a sheet up behind you and cropping in a bit tighter so the camera isn't visible. I really do like the play of light and shadow and the stern expression, it works well.