Some random pics I want to be critique

[Jamie87]

Okay lets see these two right here were taken with my crapy jamcam just a cheep little digital camera but besides the fact they are poor quality what do you think of the shots?





In both of these I like how the light shins on the subjects. But I noticed on the first picture part of her shirt has no detal it's to bright...

Okay this one was hmm cant remember what I took this with but I like this picture a lot...I wish my scanner was better tho so you could see what really looks like.



Please say what you ant about these pictures and thanks in advance.

[tubaman2010]

I like the last one the best. The colors are pretty good. Perhaps a liitle haevy composition. Too many things to look at. The first two are interesting. I like how you're experimenting with light. Perhaps if you had more light on the girl instead of just her face. A totally black background would have been better too. The dog pic woul be better if you were eye to eye with it. Like a side profile of the dog with the way you used the light would be pretty cool. Good shots though. Keep shootin!!!!!

[Sebastian]

I prettymuch agree with Tubaman. Have you been to Lilacia park? It's right by the train station. That might be a nice place to take a model and experiment with lighting and backgrounds.

[Jamie87]

Yes actually I live near there. Um yeah I took some pictures there if you look down in the forum there is another post by me titled some pics or something like that, the first two pictures were taken there.

Do you live near there?