Looking good Natalie, the improvements really helped.

One last note: keep an eye on the details in the highlights too. For example the area under the word 'Jak' has lost a few. Just mask them out if you find it hard to keep them under control when you make a correction. Do slightly blur these masks to have a smooth transistion between highlights and the area that's going to be corrected. 1-4 pixels is what I use in most images, depending on the resolution.

Well done!