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    Where is Snowy? Yoyo Szeto's Avatar
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    It Is Just Another Box

    Welcome your critiques as always.
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    Re: It Is Just Another Box

    What a great part of the world you live in to take pictures. I like it. Great work.
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    Re: It Is Just Another Box

    Excellent Yoyo.
    The bus box is a terrific addition to all the other boxes. I would go for darkening the appartment boxes a little. Great.
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    Re: It Is Just Another Box

    Very cool.
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    Where is Snowy? Yoyo Szeto's Avatar
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    Re: It Is Just Another Box

    Hi Greg, Thanks for the kind words. You are always welcome to come.

    Hi Tom, You are right about the exposure of the background. In fact, I had given up this photo. Then I tried the PS for the RAW conversion, and the result was more acceptable.

    Hi John, Thanks for the kind wrods.

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    Re: It Is Just Another Box

    Excellent Spot Yoyo!

    Great composition, and there's just a hint of blur to let you know that the bus is moving and yet it's boxy bulk neatly hides the wheels. My only nitpick is that the upper part of the frame seems a little over bright, I would try to bring down the highlights in that area light bit to play up the boxy outlines more. Otherwise, I love it!
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    Re: It Is Just Another Box

    Hi CL,
    You are absolutely right about the exposure of the building which I am not satified with. I will re-shoot the place with a CPL next time to reduce the glare on the windows. By the way, it was a tram. We have it here for about a hundred years.
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    Re: It Is Just Another Box

    Love it, there is something very calming about this shot, there don't appear to be as many people in the scene as I would expect to see so perhaps that's it. I think the colours are great, agree on the exposure comments but this certainly works very well as it is.

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