The Jumper

[Don Schaeffer]

[A.M.D.A.]

Here’s my impression about this photograph…

First of all, what I like: It does look kind of “artistic” due to the blurring, which also creates a feeling of motion and action. Perfectly well done here!:thumbsup:

And now, what I don’t like so much: I personally feel that the jumper is a little small, and too crowded in the upper-right corner. Especially since the tip of his hat is “chopped off”.

There also seems to be a large area of nearly-empty space in the bottom-left corner, which I don’t find extremely pleasing. What I really do not find attractive at all is the issue with the already-mentioned hat – it is very distracting (at least for me it is).

Conclusion: To improve this shot, I would suggest cropping considerably off the bottom-left, and some off the bottom. I can do this for you if you want, and repost the results here in this thread.

[Don Schaeffer]

helpful suggestion. Thanks Alex