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    Jenny

    Jenny wanted to make herself up to have this picture done. I think it's a beautiful portrait of her, but then I would, she's my daughter.
    I have a 17" screen how does it look on yours?
    Last edited by Alison; 02-25-2007 at 05:24 PM.

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    Re: Jenny

    You forgot the picture.
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    Re: Jenny

    I didn't forget the picture I re-sized it to 640 but it was still too large so I had to run an optimizer on it.

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    Re: Jenny

    The eyes and lips glisten in this picture. It is a wonderful portrait of a lovely young lady. Very well done.

    On a minor point I think that maybe a little less of an angle on the shoulders might have been better.

    There is a feel about the picture a "glow" if you will that feels like it is coming from inside Jenny. I know in some of the other shots she was not smiling but this one captures her with a wonderful smile.

    You should be proud of lovely daughter and your talent.
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    Re: Jenny

    Thank you so much. So I have succeeded this time lol.
    Actually this is an old file (October 2005). Taken with my little sony cybershot DSC-P10 and when I didn't really know what I was doing and it was one of my 1st attempts with my lights

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    Re: Jenny

    I like it alot , very pretty Girl.

    Can you find a lighter Blue dress ( or photo shop it ) to match her eyes ?

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    Cool idea Splats! I never thought of that. I might do that some time.

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    Re: Jenny

    I agee with Capt Len about the shoulder angle...other than that, I love this shot. Great expression, good lighting, and a great shot!

    Well done.

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    Re: Jenny

    I like this... she has very pretty eyes and a sweet expression.

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