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    Jefferson's Vines - Second Pass

    Ok, a shot with a subject....


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    Re: Jefferson's Vines - Second Pass

    I like it better than the first. The sign adds an extra element it needed.
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    Re: Jefferson's Vines - Second Pass

    i love the colors! did you saturate them more with photoshop or something? or is that just the shot with a polarizer lens?

    nice shot man.
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    Re: Jefferson's Vines - Second Pass

    Quote Originally Posted by petefontaine15
    i love the colors! did you saturate them more with photoshop or something? or is that just the shot with a polarizer lens?

    nice shot man.

    Thanks.

    There's a layer mask on which I did a gradient fill, white to black - left to right, to darken the right side a bit. There's also a little bit of unsharp but, other than that, it's as shot.

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    Re: Jefferson's Vines - Second Pass

    Quote Originally Posted by Greg McCary
    I like it better than the first. The sign adds an extra element it needed.
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    I may have to go back and reshoot this. There should be grapes on the vines by now and I can recompose this better now that I'm looking at the finished product.

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    Re: Jefferson's Vines - Second Pass

    This is a stronger shot than the first. I like the use of the sign as a subject. I think the dof could have been a little more. A bit more space to the left of the sign. Also, something about the area just to the right edge of the tree looks weird, as if it were blurred or selected and edited.
    Colors are very appealing.
    please do not edit and repost my photos


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