Jackie and thePorsche

[racedraper]

I got use a Porsche yesterday and grabbed my sister in laws friend and shoot this. It was in side on a garage . let me know if I need to change anything up.

[Frog]

I'm not a model shooter but her post looks rather cliche' to me.

[AgingEyes]

I would change the background and give more light to some part of the hood, the top and the rear left panel.

Other things I would like to see changed are things I cannot post here

[nps474]

As cute as the young women is, it does look like like almost a parody of the poses, and photos of "babes" in something like a "Cars & Chicks" magazine. I actually like the photo better without the women, I dig the way the light and background work with the car.

[racedraper]

well is this a little better. Im still learning CS3

[MB1]

She seems cute but the pose looks contrived and uncomfortable to me.

[Lori11]

Uncomfortable is right, in my opinion it either should be totally pinup (and she is not dressed for it) or let the car stand alone. She is cute but her colors are wrong for the car, shoes are good, skirt is good, top, totally wrong (Gil Elvgren is one of my all time fave artists, look at his car pinups) but I understand the idea you were going for. Try again when you get the chance, I think they are fun, cheesey or not