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    It's a Wrap...Critique please.

    Stainless steel art in front of a unusual building.The lighting was fantastic, this was a playground of colors, reflections.I took over 70 images at all angles.Havin' some fun before Christmas eve dinner. These are all 10mm captures.
    Look for more of these W I D E 10mm shots.

    Happy holidays from Mountain View,Ca.

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    Re: It's a Wrap...Critique please.

    the last is my favorite, the dramatic sky is awesome; do you have any of that one where the top of the metal...things arent so crowded?
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    Re: It's a Wrap...Critique please.

    Quote Originally Posted by Mr Yuck
    the last is my favorite, the dramatic sky is awesome; do you have any of that one where the top of the metal...things arent so crowded?
    That is exactly what I was thinking. I really like that last shot but wish all of the metal sculpture(?) was in the image.

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    Re: It's a Wrap...Critique please.

    that last shots very nice, I would just like a looser crop near the top.

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    Re: It's a Wrap...Critique please.

    Great stuff. I really like the creative lines and angles that you show in these shots. Isn't it fun when you find a location such as this?

    Thanks for sharing.

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    Re: It's a Wrap...Critique please.

    I like the last image, but i think the 3rd one is fantastic, a great absract shot. Not too keen on the others, a little too cluttered for my tastes.

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    Re: It's a Wrap...Critique please.

    ONLY 70 pictures? You are slacking off! Just kidding. Looks like a great location. The 'stairstep' building reflected in the sculpture looks like a possibility as well.

    I am partial to the tight photo of the sculpture swirling up from the ll to ur across the face of the building. It is more abstract and the tilt you applied in your montage/collage gives it a bit more appeal.

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    Re: It's a Wrap...Critique please.

    Thanks,
    I also posted a series II it's a wrap.with additional images, a looser crop on one of the images.

    It's a Wrap II

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