Jared, welcome back. and with a brand new 40D no less I think the scene is good. I'm thinking a couple of things here though. One is to have had panned down a bit more to get more of the roadway and bring the lights up more into the night. Second, i think this would be better in color. The color of the cars light and various tones of lighting here might bring that other interesting element that i think this one could use.
Still and yet, a good image
I look forward to more shots of the 40D