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Thread: Iris

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    Iris

    heres a pic i took tonight let me know what you think!
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    Re: Iris

    I think the colors are great but the composition is confusing with some of the petals cut off at the edge of the frame and I can't tell what you are focusing on.
    No, I DON'T need that.

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    Re: Iris

    I don't mind edges being cut, as long as there is a focus on something. There is no real focus in the photo. As stated, the colors are beautiful, but I'm not sure what the central focus and therefor point of the photo is.

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    Re: Iris

    Wow, this shot has so much potential: beautiful color and texture. As previously mentioned, it needs a focal point. Try some drastic cropping and go right into one of the flowers/leaves. You'll be pleasantly surprised.

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