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I too like the composition and the concept here. Something is just keeping this from being on another level and I'm not exactly sure what it is. Yes, it is a bit bright outside. . . .I think what i need to see is a bit more definition of the girl sitting. Maybe a slightly different pose. Her position and shape does not suit a perfect silhoutte and I think having a bit more exposure /detail in her body would help that along. I think you could get it in PP.
Still, nice work yoyo.
The composition is good but a slight turn looking towards the right may have been a better pose rather than straight on.
I think the lady needs a bit more exposure and the background a little less. I don't think it works as a silhouette.
Roger
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