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Thread: Into the sea

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    Into the sea

    Another cold winter day. Looking towards the city of Kirkenes from the other side of the bay.
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    Re: Into the sea

    Love the sky, love the foreground and great exposure.

    I'm tempted to think that the horizon is too centered in the frame. If you crop down from the top to the white on the left that would increase the presence of the foreground without removing too much of that really nice sky.

    Still, this is really nice just the way it is.........
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    Re: Into the sea

    Quote Originally Posted by MB1
    Love the sky, love the foreground and great exposure.

    I'm tempted to think that the horizon is too centered in the frame. If you crop down from the top to the white on the left that would increase the presence of the foreground without removing too much of that really nice sky.

    Still, this is really nice just the way it is.........
    This was my exact same thought, even before I read this.
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    Re: Into the sea

    i love it! i wouldnt change it at all myself
    great work
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    Re: Into the sea

    I would leave it as is. The horizon is high enough over the centre line for me.

    Nice capture. What are the rails for? Launching boats?

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    Re: Into the sea

    It was also my immediate thought. You will have to do some cropping. If something has to go I guess it should be part of the sky, even though it's a nice sky.

    Nice shot btw.

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