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[walterick]

Thought I'd try another one from the "Navajo Arts" trip (since that one turned out soo well LOL)

Here's a shot with the same setup inside a native american ruin. This is from the Walnut Canyon Nat'l Monument. Please, don't withold constructive criticism let me have it

Mamiya 645, 55mm, Tmax 100.



Thanks.
Rick

[jar_e]

Rick,

Interesting shot. I must admit, it took me a while to figure out what exactly I was looking at. I think the contrast between the dark cave (?) and the trees/forest is too great. The black corners on the left and right side really distract and make this picture feel unbalanced for me. However, that would be an easy fix if you decided to change it.

Good shot,

Jared

[readingr]

Rick,

This shot to me needs the entrance floor burned in a bit; It's to blown out on my monitor and I also think you need a bit more space at the bottom to balance the photo.

I like the concept but think that perhaps you need a bit more foreground interest to balance the pic.

Roger