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    Industrial Series.......part 1

    I live in a small community where wheat fields are a major resource for living. So I thought I would get some shots of different Industrial type of shots. These are the major silos in my town. More will come...... All critique welcome!

    Industrial Sunset.....(I have posted this before but it seemed to fit in my series)


    Industrial Day......


    Industrial Moon......(also posted on here previousely but seemed to fit in this series as well)


    Industrial Winter........

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    Re: Industrial Series.......part 1

    Also, in the last picture, it is not noise in the picture but rather it was snowing quite hard. I think it almost gives it a painted look.

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    Re: Industrial Series.......part 1

    i like all of these. The lighting on the first two really make the mood. I feel like you have some very strange colors going on here, and I'm not sure if your getting your gray point set close enough. But still, i like them as they are. They have a certain appeal in their oddities. Good
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    Re: Industrial Series.......part 1

    the last one is the closest to being superb, the others are alright.

    I would have moved the camera to the left slightly
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    Re: Industrial Series.......part 1

    I like 1 & 3 the best. Especially 1. The reds are very moody and mezmorizing.
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    Re: Industrial Series.......part 1

    I think these are all great. I like one and four best. One for the color (I've seen sunsets in industrial areas that color everything that way and have always found them breathtaking!) and four for it's ominous tone. Cold, bleak, dark. Right up my alley!
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    Re: Industrial Series.......part 1

    The first three are excellent really like them.

    For the last I like it but it would have been nice to get the power lines out of the picture.

    Good shooting

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    Re: Industrial Series.......part 1

    Wow, thank you everyone. I appreciate everyone taking time to look at these. I will most definitely take note of all suggestions. Thanks!!

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