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    Independence Day

    These are a few of my shots from the fireworks show in St. Paul,Minnesota. Any way that I can improve them?
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    Re: Independence Day

    Nice photo's. Blow some up and see how they look. The second from the top is my favorite.
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    Jim B.
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    Re: Independence Day

    Thanks. I may have to order some out and see what happens. -DC

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    Re: Independence Day

    You have some nice shots of light streaks in the sky.
    I always prefer fireworks with foreground and sometimes even with background.
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    Re: Independence Day

    Dave - I'd be happy: they came out well. I don't know if I could suggest anything to make them better, besides perhaps to add some interesting landmarks in the fore or background. But, they look fine as is -- clean and without clutter.

    They all look like trees or bushes to me BTW...!!, esp numbers 1 2 and 5. For # 1, I would try an expt and PP all the stuff besides the lower right works. That would make someone think it was a bush. Then add it to a photo with number 2. Number 5 might be usable too. Pretty soon you'll have a fireworks garden or something.

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