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  1. 09-24-2007, 08:23 PM #1
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    I'm New in the picture world

    I was just snapping some pictures of my son playing around.
    how do you think this one turned out.
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  2. 09-25-2007, 01:54 AM #2
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    Re: I'm New in the picture world

    Hey... welcome aboard.

    First, it could have used more space from the bottom. instead of cutting the foot!

    2nd, the man in the background is on your son's nose

    3rd, being in the forest some colors might have been better.

    However for a snapshot, it is quite interesting... i'm kind of curious to know what he was thinking.

    Cheers, and keep them coming!
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    Kindly do NOT edit my photos - I would rather try and apply your advice and learn...

    My Ramblings....
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  3. 09-25-2007, 05:35 AM #3
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    Re: I'm New in the picture world

    Marcus pretty much hit it all but I like all the vertical elements in the photo and as always I like the use of B&W.

    BTW the guy on your kids nose (I didn't notice it until I read Marcus) is kind of humorous.
    No, I DON'T need that.
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  4. 09-25-2007, 05:51 AM #4
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    Re: I'm New in the picture world

    Welcome, I agree Marcus covered it well, and as MB1 stated the verticals in the shot give this appeal.
    Lets see some more
    please do not edit and repost my photos


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