" I'm empty Move on "

[hminx]

Is the narrative obvious in this one ?

[GB1]

Pete - Hmm.. not obvious to me at this moment (but prob will be tomorrow). It has some interest, though not sure it has enough to hold a viewer's attention. The composition's unusual .. can't quite accept it. Anyway..

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[hminx]

Ok what we have here is some bird foot prints ( prob a Black back gull by the size of them ) making their way past a pipi shell checking out a possible meal......

[TomHarmon]

Yeah its hard to tell they are bird foot prints, so the message doesn't exactly come across.

[hminx]

thanks tom possibly a higher angle would have made things a little more obvious