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I bet this was a beautiful sight in real life! I think the thing that hurts it as a photo is that there is not a focal point. The bit of red in the center or the broad leaves to the right come the closest to being your center of interest, and neither are strong enough on its own to get the job done. Now if you had your dog or your kid in there, you would have a winner!
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Paula
Your editing is welcomed. A picture is worth...
All can look. Few will see. Less will know.
The Truth can be anything it will. I just want to know Truth.
I think that this would be an excellent place to try something like moving the camera and/or zooming with a long shutter speed. - TF
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I am no better than you. I critique to teach myself to see.
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Feel free to edit my photos or do anything else that will help me learn.
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Sony/Minolta - way more gear than talent.
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