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And I wish you'd left less on the left on more on the right but the centering fits your series well.
Another good capture. I'm thinking when you get enough of these put together you could make a book.
Thanks Fx, Thanks Frog. There as actually a Nissan truck setting on the right. I had to clone part of it. I have went by this subject several times an the truck always seems to be there. There are some post on the left that you can see if you look hard, They show up better in the color edit. I thought they might fit in the print.
I am like Barney Fife, I have a gun but Andy makes me keep the bullet in my pocket..
I keep looking at this and wanting more, but I can;t put my finger on what I want. It just feels empty with no story behind it for me. Perhaps I want to see some of next door in the pic.
Perhaps its the tonality.
Its driving me nuts trying to figure this out.
Roger
"I hope we will never see the day when photo shops sell little schema grills to clamp onto our viewfinders; and the Golden Rule will never be found etched on our ground glass."from The mind's eye by Henri Cartier-Bresson
My Web Site: www.readingr.com DSLR
Canon 5D; EF100-400 F4.5-5.6L IS USM; EF24-70 F2.8L USM 50mm F1.8 II; EF 100 F2.8 Macro Digital
Canon Powershot Pro 1; Canon Ixus 100
I copied onto the PC and played with it and I now know what was bugging me.
If you look at the photo, it speaks of dilapidation but the tonality did not back this up, not gritty enough. I did a small adjustment with the curves to deepen the shadows and kept the highlights where they are and bob's your uncle I love it.
Roger
"I hope we will never see the day when photo shops sell little schema grills to clamp onto our viewfinders; and the Golden Rule will never be found etched on our ground glass."from The mind's eye by Henri Cartier-Bresson
My Web Site: www.readingr.com DSLR
Canon 5D; EF100-400 F4.5-5.6L IS USM; EF24-70 F2.8L USM 50mm F1.8 II; EF 100 F2.8 Macro Digital
Canon Powershot Pro 1; Canon Ixus 100
If I knew you were going to want it I would have kept it:lol:
Here is one I did this morning. Added a touch of noise as well.
Roger
"I hope we will never see the day when photo shops sell little schema grills to clamp onto our viewfinders; and the Golden Rule will never be found etched on our ground glass."from The mind's eye by Henri Cartier-Bresson
My Web Site: www.readingr.com DSLR
Canon 5D; EF100-400 F4.5-5.6L IS USM; EF24-70 F2.8L USM 50mm F1.8 II; EF 100 F2.8 Macro Digital
Canon Powershot Pro 1; Canon Ixus 100
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