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Thread: I grew a little

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    Member xsport652's Avatar
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    I grew a little

    Took this one real quick and loved the shadows.
    What do you think?


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    Re: I grew a little

    I like the idea but as it stands right now, the skateboard and the shadow are two seperate elements. so the focus is somewhat shared and takes away from the effectiveness IMO.

    How about if you turned the skate board on its side and placed it at the bottom of the shadow. Sorta like the shadow is riding the skateboard? Then you'd have to have your arm action in a way to suggest your riding it too, making it a bit difficult to actually take this photo. Just throwing some ideas out there.
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    Re: I grew a little

    Nice, surreal feeling eith the board and the shadow. Now pic up your left foot and get the shadow of it just so on the board...
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