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Thread: Hurry Spring

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    Hurry Spring

    I finally got out to shoot for the first time this year. I took these at the local h.s. baseball diamond. Let me know what you think of these. Thanks.


    A gaussian blur was added to this one.
    Camera model: NIKON D70
    Date/Time: 2007:01:04 11:58:15
    Resolution: 547 x 400
    Flash used: No
    Focal length: 70.0mm (35mm equivalent: 105mm)
    Exposure time: 0.0020 s (1/500)
    Aperture: f/4.5
    Exposure bias: -0.33
    Whitebalance: Auto
    Metering Mode: matrix
    Exposure: aperture priority (semi-auto)


    Converted to black and white

    Camera model: NIKON D70
    Date/Time: 2007:01:04 11:58:20
    Resolution: 400 x 483
    Color/bw: Black and white
    Flash used: No
    Focal length: 70.0mm (35mm equivalent: 105mm)
    Exposure time: 0.0020 s (1/500)
    Aperture: f/4.5
    Exposure bias: -0.33
    Whitebalance: Auto
    Metering Mode: matrix
    Exposure: aperture priority (semi-auto)



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    Re: Hurry Spring

    I like #1 best, I think it would be neat if you had a couple of ballplayers blurred into the background. Baseball is my cup ot tea....
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    Re: Hurry Spring

    Crop a little of the top of the background out and see what that looks like.

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    Re: Hurry Spring

    I like the color version but photo quality aside, where is the snow? Isn't this the first week of January? In Michigan?

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    :yikes:

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    Re: Hurry Spring

    Quote Originally Posted by Coastal Flyer
    I like the color version but photo quality aside, where is the snow? Isn't this the first week of January? In Michigan?

    CF
    26th straight day of above normal temperatures, and 8th straight day over 42. I've used my snow blower for 10 minutes so far. Can't believe it------but I'll take it.
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    Re: Hurry Spring

    Quote Originally Posted by Coastal Flyer
    I like the color version but photo quality aside, where is the snow? Isn't this the first week of January? In Michigan?

    CF

    Snow? What is this snow you speak of? :P
    I dont live in Michigan but I live in Ohio and we've barely seen snow at all this winter :cryin:


    I love the first picture. The colors are perfect and the red in the stitching of the baseball is just vibrant enough. good eye

    the second one looks a little cramped to me and the black and white doesnt have as nice of an affect.

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    Re: Hurry Spring

    What do you mean hurry spring. I am still waiting for winter!

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    Re: Hurry Spring

    John, i like the b&w version because of the tighter crop and the b&w brings me a nostalgic feel to it. I am still waiting for winter here, I do like the cold crisp air and I'm feeling cheated so far.
    please do not edit and repost my photos


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    Re: Hurry Spring

    John,

    Not seen this seem to missing photos. However, its the B&W for me as far as composition goes.

    The colour one needs something else in the picture, fuzzy people... Like Greg said.

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