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    Hungry Wasp

    Hi,
    Took this a couple of days ago and finally got round to playing with it in Photoshop. Any thoughts?



    Cheers,
    Chris

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    Re: Hungry Wasp

    Quote Originally Posted by Hindey
    Hi,
    Took this a couple of days ago and finally got round to playing with it in Photoshop. Any thoughts?



    Cheers,
    Chris
    I like this sort of photo, but its not as grabbing as it could be -- too bad you weren't blessed with more dramatic light, some sort of bold colors, or something of the sort.

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    Re: Hungry Wasp

    I think this one might benefit from a tighter cropping so we can see the wasp better. Color might make it better also but I am not sure without seeing the color version.

    Greg

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    Re: Hungry Wasp

    Hi! Your shot is interesting but I can't help wanting to see the color. I don't feel that it offers enough in black and white. I also think it should be cropped quite a bit on the right...
    Kit

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    Re: Hungry Wasp

    I agree about needing to see this in color. The wasp does not readily stand out as it should. I think if there were a part of the wasp where there were no buds behind it, it would get it to stand out more. And also agree with a crop from the right, but not eliminating all the black bg.
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    gary


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