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    Hookah

    Just got a remote trigger for my flash. Played around with it a bit last night.
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    Re: Hookah

    I would like to see a tight shot here. I think there might be a lot of negative space and the man's face feels dead center. The light on the left overwhelms me.
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    Re: Hookah

    This picture reminds me of Bob Dylan in his day. I agree with manacsa that the light is a bit overpowering, but I like the atmosphere of the shot.

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    Re: Hookah

    Thanks for the feedback guys. I knew the light on the left was a little overpowering but still liked the atmosphere and feel of it.

    Played with a bit of tighter crop here.
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