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Oh, I like it!! So somber and mysterious. I want to crop off the bit where it falls off on the left but not sure if it's just me naturally wanting to balance it or if it would actually be beneficial to the mood and comp.
I liked your first version of this one too, Barty, although I hadn't commented on it yet. The sky seems powerful and the silhouette of the church against it works for me. I don't mind the drop-off, as it kind of goes has the look of a set of steps as you go from left to right, which I think is kind of cool.