A Hint of Colour.

[kyle]

This is the first time I've ever really tried anything like this before. I think it looks alright. I know I have room to improve. Anyhoo, lets hear it. Comments, advice, whatever. =)

[GB1]

kyle - I think the idea is good, but it's somewhat handicaped by the composition. The somewhat bland wooden wall taking up as much of the area like this, it seems to give it a 2-D feel instead of the 3-D feel it should have. The b&w background would work better if it wasn't so, well, ugly (looks like a junkyard or someplace). Also, although the spot color almost perfect, the decals themselves are underwhelming. There's better subjects out there.. just keep lookin'...

Gb

[CLKunst]

Kyle
I agree with GB and think that your idea is strong but the picture is empty. I assume this is a race track of some kind like bikes or something so I would suggest returning during an actual race and trying it again, same shot, but this time try to freeze a racer in the window of your wall as they come around. You just need something to add some action or tension to this scene.
Regards